Description of Picture
This looks like a happy winter picture. On the top of the picture, there is a pine grove and a house. The green of the pine grove looks fresh, and the house has a chimney. The house was made by red bricks. On the left side of the middle in picture, two children a boy and a girl ride a sled. Sleds were made of wood and iron bars. Both the children wear wooly hats and scarves, and the boy rides the sled behind the girl. He is smiling a lot, but she is afraid of rides. She is not smiling, and she grasp the strap of the sled. Right side of bottom of the picture, a dog ran with the boy and girl. The dog's hair is brown, and it has white paws. Also, the dog was enjoying running with the sled. The whole picture has a white back ground because there is a lot of snow. It looks very clean. To sum-up, the boy and the dog like the ride, but the girl is scared of the ride. However, they really enjoy the snowing winter, and the picture looks happy and warm.
from Linda Wesley:
ReplyDeleteI like that you used some very specific vocabulary like "pine grove" and "paws."
Hi, Solji.
ReplyDeleteI was impressed by your specific language use.
Nice descriptive paragraph Solji, I like your details, and your organization.
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ReplyDeleteI can image the picture in my brain,
and there are some details are really good.
nice job
ReplyDeletei really like your long paragraph.
Yes!, it's true, there are very sophisticated words
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