Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Definition paragraph(Fix)

What is Han-Bok?

A long time ago, Korean people wore a Han-Bok. All of the people that lived in Korea wore the Han-Bok, but it was weaved difference according to one’s position in society. If a person had a high position, the person wore very high quality clothes such as a fancy, gorgeous, and expensive Han-Bok, but if a person had a lowly position, the person wore a plainly designed Han-Bok. Now, I will introduce about the Han-Bok, which is Korea’s traditional clothing. First, Han-Bok has two kinds of shape for women and men. For example, women wear the Jeogori which is a Korean traditional jacket and the Chima which is a Korean traditional skirt. They have beautiful colors. Men wear the Jeogori and pants, but men also wear several other clothes because they often go out side such as work, and study in other places or trip. Next, these days we mostly wear the Han-Bok at festivals and celebrations. For instance, when we have a wedding day, a bride, a groom and their family wear them during the wedding ceremony. Also, we wear them when we have holiday such as New Year and Korea’s Thanksgiving. In addition, on a baby’s first birthday, they should wear the Han-Bok. Last, there is a small difference in shape between the past and the present. For example, we wore the original Han-Bok in the past, but these days Koreans, do not like them because they think, the Han-Bok is uncomfortable and expensive. So, they change their design, and quality of fabrics. It looks comfortable and reduces the burden of wearing them. In conclusion, I introduced about the Han-Bok, which is the traditional clothing of Korea. The Han-Bok has different shapes for women and men, and its shape and fabric have evolved over time. Also, when Korean people have festivals and celebrations, they usually wear the Han-Bok.

4 comments:

  1. 3-I like the paragraph because there a some interesting imformation abut Han-Bok. And, there are a lot of detail about that. Also, you used some adjective clauses is good.

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  2. 3-I think this paragraph is a good paragraph because although I knew the Han-bok already, after reading this, I know the more about that. This is because there are a lot of information about the Han-Bok. Good job, Solji!

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  3. 3- I think this is a good paragraph because I learn about Hank-Bok in she used a good example to help us understand.

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  4. 1- This paragraph's organization helped me to understand Han-Bok easily, so I think this paragraph is the best paragraph!

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