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What is Han-Bok?

A long time ago, Korean people wore a Han-Bok. All of the people that lived in Korea wore the Han-Bok, but it was weaved difference according to one’s position in society. If a person had a high position, the person wore very high quality clothes such as a fancy, gorgeous, and expensive Han-Bok, but if a person had a lowly position, the person wore a plainly designed Han-Bok. Now, I will introduce about the Han-Bok, which is Korea’s traditional clothing. First, Han-Bok has two kinds of shape for women and men. For example, women wear the Jeogori which is a Korean traditional jacket and the Chima which is a Korean traditional skirt. They have beautiful colors. Men wear the Jeogori and pants, but men also wear several other clothes because they often go out side such as work, and study in other places or trip. Next, these days we mostly wear the Han-Bok at festivals and celebrations. For instance, when we have a wedding day, a bride, a groom and their family wear them during the wedding ceremony. Also, we wear them when we have holiday such as New Year and Korea’s Thanksgiving. In addition, on a baby’s first birthday, they should wear the Han-Bok. Last, there is a small difference in shape between the past and the present. For example, we wore the original Han-Bok in the past, but these days Koreans, do not like them because they think, the Han-Bok is uncomfortable and expensive. So, they change their design, and quality of fabrics. It looks comfortable and reduces the burden of wearing them. In conclusion, I introduced about the Han-Bok, which is the traditional clothing of Korea. The Han-Bok has different shapes for women and men, and its shape and fabric have evolved over time. Also, when Korean people have festivals and celebrations, they usually wear the Han-Bok.

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Curriculum in Saudi Arabia and Korea

Saudi Arabia and Korea are great countries in education, but they have several similarities and difference in curriculum. The first similarity is related to subjects that academic and nonacademic in elementary school and high school. For example, both Saudi Arabian and Korean students take math, science, society and their own language. In addition, Saudi Arabia students take Islamic history and geography too, but Korean students do not study those subjects in elementary school. In high school, Saudi Arabia students take the same subjects as in elementary school, plus gymnastics, chemistry and English. Also, Korean students take the same subjects as elementary school, plus English and history. In addition, Korean students study music, art, and physical education. On the other hand, Saudi Arabia students do not take music. Another similarity soncerns the hours students in Saudi Arabia and Korea must spend on homework. In both countries, students have from 1 to 3 hours of homework each day. While Saudi Arabian students study 7 hours each day and 5 days per week, Korean students study 9 hours each day 6 days per week. Last point of difference related to the environment. The two countries have different teachers for each subject in school. Both countries have two exams per semester. However, Saudi Arabian students have to pass the exams in order go to the next grades, but in Korea, they do not need to pass the exam. In conclusion, Saudi Arabia and Korea have two similarities and one difference between their curriculum systems. Both countries have very similar subjects and environment, but their study hours are very different.

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     Vacation in Alaska and Hawaii is different in several ways and the same in others.  First, there are a lot of accommodations in Alaska and Hawaii. For example, accommodations in Alaska very from basic to luxury, but these hotels have quite good of quality. Similarly Hawaii has a wide range of excellent hotels and condos from luxury to budget priced too. Next Hawaii has many beautiful places. Similarly Alaska has attractive areas too. For instance, Hawaii has Volcano National park and Waimea Canyon, and it has a lot of beautiful beaches. Also Alaska has the Chuhach Mountains and Mount Mckinley, and the glaciers in Alaska are awesome. Last, Hawaii is hot and humid. On other hand, Alaska’s weather is seldom rainy during the summer. If you want hot weather during summer, you won’t like Alaska’s weather better than Hawaii’s, so you have to go to Hawaii. To sum up, there are showing different in several ways and the same in others of vacation in Alaska and Hawaii. If you select a place, you will not regret it, and you can have good time during on your vacation.

How to Kill a Houseplant(Fix)

     If you want to kill your houseplant, you should follow these steps. First, you can bring goats and cows into your house. For example, goats and cows will eat your plants quickly because they eat grass. Before you bring goats and cows, you should ask to proprietor because they will make noisy, and your neighbors will be angry. Second, you should not give your plants water. Plants want water twice a week, so you can leave your house for three months, and your plants will be made dry. If you do not leave your house, you can feed hot water, coffee, and soda to your houseplant. After that the houseplant will die. Last, you can set your house on fire. For instance, you can fill all the house with gasoline and light. Also, you can turn on your oven during your vacation. In conclusion, these steps show how to kill a houseplant.

The View from Living Room Window for My House

     When I observed a view from living room for my house, I could watch different kinds of funny animals. For example, I heard bird’s voices when I woke up in the morning. They looked like they were singing songs, and they had conversations to each other. I also saw families of ducks. They always moved together, and they had great time because they looked happy. Also, I saw small and big rabbits. When I saw these rabbits, they were usually chewing something. One of the rabbits looked chubby. The rabbit had big cheeks, but the rabbit was very cute, and it had beautiful gray hair and nice ears. Then I saw yellow cat. Actually, my housemate had a yellow cat named Bisco. So, I was surprised when I saw the cat outside of my house. They looked very similar. Brisco has yellow eyes, but the cat had blue eyes. After a few days, my friend and I were watching TV. Suddenly, Brisco ran up to the living room window, so I went to the living room window too. Then I could see the cat. At that time, the cat could see us, and the cat ran to our window. So, Brisco and the cat looked like fight because they got angry, but I did not know why they got angry. My friend said, “They saw each other a first time, and Brisco never went outside, so he never saw another cat. I think, he was surprised about another cat”. I think so, too. It was his first experience. To sum up, you will visit my house you can see interesting animals from living room window of my house.      

How to kill a houseplant

      If you want to kill your houseplant, you should follow these steps. First, you can bring to goats and cows in your house. For example, goats and cows eat all plants quickly because they eat grass. Before you bring goats and cows, you should ask to proprietor because they make noisy, and neighbors will be angry. Second, you should not give water. Plants want water twice a week, so you can away your house for three months, so the plants will be made dry. If you do not away your house, you can feed hot water, coffee, and soda in to your houseplant. After then houseplant will die. Last, you can set your house on fire. For instance, you can fill all the house by gasoline and light, Also, you can turn on your oven during your vacation. In conclusion, these steps show how to kill a houseplant.

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Description of Picture    

     This looks like a happy winter picture. On the top of the picture, there is a pine grove and a house. The green of the pine grove looks fresh, and the house has a chimney. The house was made by red bricks. On the left side of the middle in picture, two children a boy and a girl ride a sled. Sleds were made of wood and iron bars. Both the children wear wooly hats and scarves, and the boy rides the sled behind the girl. He is smiling a lot, but she is afraid of rides. She is not smiling, and she grasp the strap of the sled. Right side of bottom of the picture, a dog ran with the boy and girl. The dog's hair is brown, and it has white paws. Also, the dog was enjoying running with the sled. The whole picture has a white back ground because there is a lot of snow. It looks very clean. To sum-up, the boy and the dog like the ride, but the girl is scared of the ride. However, they really enjoy the snowing winter, and the picture looks happy and warm.